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英検2級英作文 2022年度第3回分

2023.05.07 10:48

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Some people say that Japan should use the Internet for people to vote in elections. Do you agree with this opinion?


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 Some people argue that online voting systems encourage greater voter participation and streamline elections' process. However, I cannot agree with this opinion due to two main reasons.

 Firstly, online voting is susceptible to hacking and fraud, thus undermining the virtue of the right to vote. Unfortunately, we cannot secure the electoral process due to a lack of security system for this.

 Secondly, electronic voting system requires a certain knowledge about the Internet, which has a risk of excluding elderly people from participating in elections. This means an unfair representation of the population.

 To ensure the integrity of its democratic process, I think Japan should stick to traditional voting systems.